You are going on a short training course at a college in New Zealand. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter, explain your situation describe the accommodation you require say when you will need it

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to inquire about the accommodation facilities available for the
course
seekers at your college. I am Alex Jones, an applicant for the forthcoming training
course
on "Mass Communication", at your college. I am hoping that you would kindly arrange suitable accommodation for me. I am currently employed in Southern Ireland, as a Trainer in a multinational accounting firm. As you already know, the
course
which I have joined will start
from
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1st
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of July. In Ireland, a location far away from the city where I live. I would like to take the privilege of describing my accommodation needs.
First
of all, I am expecting a small flat or at least a room for me.
Secondly
, I would like to dwell in
calm
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and quiet environment, as the peace of the workplace is important to me.
Lastly
, I would be glad to stay close to the
course
venue, so as to save time and concentrate on
studies
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. I plan to arrive on 27th of
this
month and
hence
would request you to finalize my flat or room before I arrive. I will stay at
this
place as long as I have my training
course
, possibly till September. Yours faithfully, James Smith
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