You hired a car from a company, while. While you were driving you had a small accident. Write a letter to the company to explain it. In your letter: when and where you hired it describe how the accident happened what kind of action did you take after the accident

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter as I have hired a car from your company for

completion

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the completion

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of my household project. I hired

car

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a car

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on the 1st May 2022 from your head office in the Syndey. I am very sorry to inform you that car met with a small accident yesterday.

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, I was driving from

Coachin

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Coaching

Cochin

to Cambridge. The

mini bus

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mini-bus

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overtook my vehicle from the left side and hit the mirror damaging it completely. I informed the police immediately, and they arrived on the spot for enquiry. A case of rash driving was filed against the bus driver. Fortunately for me, their insurance company guaranteed

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apply

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full payment for the repair as the driver was charged with the entire responsibility. Henceforth, please be informed that I will take care of the repairs and claim the cost later from the insurance company. If you need any

further

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information, please call me on my number. Thank you for your understanding. Yours sincerely, Peter

jasmeetkaur2016Fri Sep 09 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

164 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

rented
agreement number
accident
incident
collision
damage
fault
insurance
liability
emergency services
report
evidence
witnesses
contact details
repair
compensation
notify
immediate action
circumstances
chronological order
weather conditions
traffic
cooperate
return
reference number

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In the modern world, mobile and smartphone use has become universal in most parts of the world. Although there are clearly many advantages of this technology, there are many who believe it also brings many disadvantages. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

Some film companies spend millions of dollars on the production of a single movie. Is it necessary to spend a lot of money to make a good movie? What factors contribute to the success of a movie? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.