You recently took up a part-time job for a local company. After a few weeks, you realized there were some problems with the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter: explain why you took up the job describe the problems you experienced suggest what could be done about them
Dear Sir,
I am lily. I have joined the part-time job as a Receptionist in your Paradise Hotel since May. I have taken the job to gain some experience and which would
Add a missing verb
be helpful
helpful
in my future career Replace the word
help
also
. I am writing to your kind attention to few
issues that I have encountered in the Hotel.
I have noticed that some of Correct article usage
a few
night
duty staff Correct article usage
the night
sleeps
inside the rooms or quarters Correct subject-verb agreement
sleep
instead
to be at
duty. Literally, I and Lindsay- who Correct your spelling
a
is
Wrong verb form
am
also
a new employee, work and manage everything at night. They even do not bother to come to the reception area at busy hours when we have an influx of guests - usually on Friday nights. I believe this
is against the rules.
Moreover
, breakfast is supposed to be ready before 7:00 am but it is not the case. Sometimes the guests have to wait till 8:00 am for breakfast to arrive. Some of the guests have lodged complaints regarding this
.
I thought you should be notified about these irregularities. Duty officers on the night shift should be given warning so that they execute their duties. Besides
, look at the recent complaints regarding the delay in breakfast serving and talk to the head chef.
I look forward to hear from you as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
LilySubmitted by jasmeetkaur2016 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite