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A restaurant has placed an advertisement for a manager in the local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this job Tell them when you are free to attend an interview

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Dear Sir, I am writing to apply for the job opening of the manager and came across the opportunity in today’s newspaper dated 16-June-2022. I believe that my experience aligns with the requirements of
this
 role. Let me explain my current status in more detail. Currently, I am working as a Manager in hotel sunrise in Shimla
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 3 years and got an appreciation certificate
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 two years .Before that, I was working in
restaurant
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 in Manali.
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, my hometown is Chandigarh and all
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 members are staying there.
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 am looking job in my city so, I can shift to my place. I have an experience of five years in the same field and
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working
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restaurant
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.
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 section and know how to handle customers politely. I will be available from Thursday to Saturday for
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. I will be more than happy to cooperate during any other times
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 if these times conflict with your schedule. I look forward
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 your positive reply. All experience certificate and resume
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 attached with
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 letter. Yours faithfully, Peter
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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