You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently, a new neighbour Mr.Jackson moved in who has loud parties several times a week. You have spoken to Mr.Jackson but are not very close friends Write a letter to Mr.Jackson. In your letter: • Explain the situation • Describe why it bothers you • Suggest a solution

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Jackson, I am writing
letter to have disturbance in my studies due to your frequent celebrations which involve music on
loud speakers
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. I have observed various times that you organize parties at your place and play songs at high volume till
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at night
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, many guests come
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your apartment and make huge noise while ravishing the party. I moved to
building with
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intention to prepare for a competitive exam.
, I am unable to study for
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two months because of your events as you play loud music throughout the night, which hinders my sleep.
, I fail to be productive while I study because of incomplete sleep, which is a serious concern for me as the test is approaching soon.
, I request you to understand my circumstances and try to cooperate with me. I request you to organize parties only on weekends since I visit my parents on those days.
, you can continue your gatherings once my test is over which is in the
month. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, John
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