Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
We are living in
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an advance
advance
era where people have very less time to take care Replace the word
advanced
about
external problems.As a Change preposition
of
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matter
meter
of Correct your spelling
mater
fact
we are focusing on internal well beings Add a comma
,fact
instead
of external.This
is the main reason that there are many problems rising
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arising
there
heads nowadays.
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their
one
of the major Change preposition
on one
problem
which we are facing currently, And Change to a plural noun
problems
that is
growing
amount of Correct article usage
the growing
rubbish
we are producing every year.
In a rough idea
we are Add a comma
,idea
prducing
thousands of tons Correct your spelling
producing
rubbish
every day and these numbers are growing very rapidly.There are many reasons behind this
but the main reason is "Plastic
" which are
found in huge Correct subject-verb agreement
is
quiantity
everywhere,almost every human is using Correct your spelling
quantity
every
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it every
days
in different forms.
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day
Plastic
is the biggest cause of increasing rubbish
in the world.We are using Plastinc
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Plastic
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everywhere
every where
in the form of Correct your spelling
everywhere
plastic
bags, plastic
bottles,plastic
packed snacks and many more.Due to this
rubbish
people are getting sick, more
viral infections are increasing day by day.One of the Correct word choice
and more
study
in Newyork University Of Heath and Care states that due to the smoke of Change to a plural noun
studies
buring
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burning
the
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apply
plastic
rubbish
people are having Lungs
cancer.
To reduce Change the noun form
Lung
this
dialema
, Correct your spelling
dilemma
government
must take Add an article
the government
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serious
seriouse
steps to reduce the production and Correct your spelling
serious
usages
of Fix the agreement mistake
usage
plastic
products
.Correct your spelling
Nowadays
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in many developed countries Correct your spelling
Nowadays
paper
base
products
has
been replaced by Correct subject-verb agreement
have
the
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apply
plastic
products
.
In my experience using the paper
base
products
instead
of plastic
products
will be really helpfull
to reduce Correct your spelling
helpful
rubbish
growth.
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Secondly
Secondlly
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Secondly
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government
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the governement
governement
should Correct your spelling
government
also
warn companies to use paper
packing there
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their
products
in paper
base
material instead
of plastic
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the plastic
base
.
We all know that,
it can not Remove the comma
apply
be happened
overnight, we should all take the Change to the active voice
happen
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responsibility
resposibilty
to reduce the use of Correct your spelling
responsibility
plastic
and
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apply
on the other hand
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government
governement
should give Correct your spelling
government
certain
time span to industries to reduce producing Correct article usage
a certain
plastic
materials.It will Correct your spelling
definitely
definatelly
be Correct your spelling
definitely
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helpful
helpfull
to reduce Correct your spelling
helpful
rubbish
in
a huge Change preposition
by
quintity
.Correct your spelling
quantity
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