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Some people believe that traveling with in a city is better by a car while other think bicycle is better means. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#people #city #car #bicycle
Nowadays, in
this
 modern era pollution has been increasing day by day. The transparent system makes more polluted the
environment
.some
people
 believe that in choose
the
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car
in
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 short travelling, while others think that bicycles are a better option rather than
the
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car
. I discuss both views in
further
 paragraphs. On the one hand, travelling by
a
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car
 better option for long distances it is Faster than a
bicycle
.it has more comfortable and safe driving.
Moreover
, the government has improved road conditions in the
city
. Mostly,
people
 choose their own
car
 rather than public transport facilities.
For example
, a survey conducted by BBC news channel showed that 60% of individuals choose their own
car
 that
travel
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 Rather than public transportation.
On the other hand
, some
people
 believe that
bicycle
 is more beneficial as compared to
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a
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car
. Because it does not create pollution in the
environment
 it is an eco-friendly system. The government should make new
bicycle
 tracks in the
city
 for public travelling by
bicycle
 in the
city
.
Bicycle
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The bicycle
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 has been
also
 more beneficial for health issues it decreases disease in the human body and makes the active body.
Furthermore
, the countryside area public has fewer diseases in the body because they live in a clean
environment
 and they choose
bicycle
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in
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for
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 a short distance
as
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rather than
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a car
the car
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car
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.
For instance
, according to the ,study the United Kingdom has cleaned the
environment
 rather than other nations because it makes new
bicycle
 tracks and provides
city
 maps for each person. In my opinion,
the
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bicycle
have
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 more beneficial for the
environment
 rather than cars because it is an eco-friendly system but,
people
 can travel in the
city
 and cover short distances.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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