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Some experts beleive that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advatages and outweigh the disadvantages

#experts #beleive #children #language #school #advatages
Nowadays, English is becoming
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language
. Some
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children
to learn
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 overseas
tongue
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 at
early
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stage
 .While
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 most
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individuals
 opposed that idea .In
this
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 we will discuss
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one's
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 and
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 of
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Firstly
Firatly
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Firstly
, learning
foreign
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a foreign
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language
 at
early
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stage
 is better because they are less afraid of making mistakes .
Children
also
 make
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 because they
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 what they say .
Moreover
,
children
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 brain is fresh
at
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 primary
school
life
 .That's why
,
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 they learn more vocabulary at
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beginning
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beggining
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beginning
 of their
life
 .If
children
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 brain is fresh they remind words which they learn at
school
 and use them in their daily
life
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For instance
 , my
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cousin
is study
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 in
france
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 he was about 11 years old and they
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 very well with their parents and teachers .
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, there are many drawbacks of learning
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language
 at starting level of
children
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life
 .The most important aspect is parent contribution at home .Because
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,
children
 parent with
children
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language
 .While
,
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their
children
 learn
foreign
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a foreign
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language
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 at
school
. If,
this
 thing happen student give up their learning because of
this
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immature
inmature
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immature
 at
this
stage
 .In daily
life
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children
 feel
burden
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a burden
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 on their
mind
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 because their teacher
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him
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 other knowledge while they speak
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language
 with socials . To sum
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 all , learning
foreign
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language
 at
school
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 because they are not
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criticized
 for their errors and their mind is fresh at
this
stage
 .on the other side, they feel
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 on
mind
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 and they give up their study because of native speakers .
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