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Some people say that computer skills should be added to primary subjects in elementary schoolsuch as reading,writing and math How far do you agree or disagree?

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In
this
 modern world, technology is used mostly everywhere and many people think that
computer
 skills should be taught in elementary schools
such
 as reading, writing and maths. In the essay, I will elaborate on the pros and cons of
this
 statement.
Firstly
, We cannot deny that technology is a tremendous part of our life nowadays ,
thus
, it is important we are acquainted with
computer
 skills. So, I believe that Infomation technology should be introduced at a younger age to
students
 of elementary school.
Moreover
, my son who is six years old is doing
computer
 at school and I am impressed
of
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 his knowledge and
definitely
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 I can observe the benefits of studying
this
 subject at a younger age. On the other side, I believe that
students
 should have
a
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strict supervision when they are accessing the internet. Inadvertently, they can be exposed to dangerous things
such
 as
pronography
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pornography
 or to malicious people who
wants
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 to harm children. Obviously, parents should be very cautious and limit access to some applications when kids have access to a tablet, a phone or a
computer
.
Furthermore
,
students
 who are too
much
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exposed to
computer
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 and tablets may have speech delays and nervosity. In conclusion, I believe that
computer
 skills are essential nowadays.
However
, precautions should be taken to ensure that
students
 use the
computer
 wisely.
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