Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It’s often held that public

health

can be improved significantly by increasing the number of

sports

facilities

. Others argue that additional factors have the upper hand,

such

as

lifestyle

and healthy meals.

This

essay will discuss both sides of these views and support the opinion of the latter one. On the one hand, there is no doubt that the number of

sports

centres in towns would probably attract people to join. Especially, if it was located near their resident accommodations or workplaces.

However

, a recent survey study has demonstrated that those

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living near support

facilities

intend to have a better

health

status and excellent physical condition than others.

As a result

, the hospital rooms were occupant to receive more patients from other provinces.

For example

, the Japanese government is working to

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at least 100 new

sports

facilities

in every city

such

as playgrounds, football courts, public gyms, swimming pools, etc. Their experts believe, these

facilities

will enhance

health

and awareness levels. As well as will result in less frequent needs for the cities’ medical

facilities

.

On the other hand

, public

health

can not only be measured on the count of

sports

participants.

Thus

, there are some crucial factors

such

as mental status, media influence,

lifestyle

, meals, and others to be considered.

Nevertheless

, some people are inclined to absorb and attract more body fats and sicknesses

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their immune natural system.

Furthermore

, these measures can be controllable to some standards upon medical consultation and food control.

For instance

, the

sports

facilities

in Egypt on count to the population are very minimal. Yet, the Egyptians who live in the villages are less in require

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medical care.

This

is because of the fresh food, basic

lifestyle

, and less weather pollution. In conclusion, despite the more

sports

participants are technically

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in improving their physical

health

. Yet, other necessities are likely to be more affectable on public

health

such

as

lifestyle

, and food control.