It is thought by some that a school teacher's role is to motivate and inspire students. However, other people believe that a teacher's primary role is to pass on knowledge. What do you think is a role of a teacher?

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and everything over
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from their home, without actually having to go to
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has many benefits one of them is to find the material to study your desired subject. I somewhat disagree with the idea of letting
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especially tho who have access to
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and can have proper education there. No matter how much we learn from the
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in can’t compete with an institution. Schools and institutions are not only limited to knowledge but they
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help students learn social skills. They can make new friends in reality, they can get involved in physical activities like sports and athletics; which is not possible to do through the
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can play an essential role.
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has a negative effect on young
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it can be utilized for many purposes, like learning some special skills or making a new online friend. The
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has plenty of interesting and useful content, my personal favourite is cooking videos. I believe the
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there is no doubt that nothing can replace an educational institution because education is a basic right of every human being.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • comprehensive development
  • fostering curiosity
  • building confidence
  • lifelong love of learning
  • solid foundation
  • critical thinking skills
  • academic success
  • educational landscape
  • navigating information
  • holistic education
  • ethical values
  • social responsibility
  • personalized learning
  • diverse needs
  • learning styles
  • tailored educational experience
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