Some people think that the increase in international travel has a negative impact on the environment and should be restricted. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It goes without saying that the amount of international trips has increased

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because modern

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have more possibilities to

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as they started to earn more money. People’s opinions differ, as to whether international flying should be restricted due to the negative impact on the

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, while others don’t see any problem

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it. Personally, I believe that international

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imposes some risks on the surroundings, but those effects can be mitigated.

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with, we know that the ecological situation in the world is getting worse and worse, and, of course, partly it happens because of the fact that the number of flights has skyrocketed if we compare it with those 50 years ago. There has been

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by environmentalists that the amount of pollution emitted by aeroplanes.

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, mankind is getting more and more capricious they are not satisfied with just ancient architecture, they want something unique

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that are vital eco-system, especially those fragile areas like Antarctica.

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why many folks opt for restricting international flights.

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. it has an effect on nature surrounding and dwellers who live near the airport

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as noise pollution and air pollution.

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, another reason that affects the

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is most

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generate waste, which has a deep impact on the local urban image. They are ignorant and do not respect the rule of the place they visit.

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, some people who live near the seaside have often complained that visitors who come to the beach leave some waste food and plastic bottles in the sand. In my opinion, as people are used to travelling it will be very difficult to restrict international flights, and it will affect greatly tourist business, and tourists will lose jobs. I think that we should better try to find other solutions by explaining the impact of the flight on tourism so they can choose to

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by train, and as it has become more comfortable \ faster and convenient, it will reduce any threats to the

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. In conclusion, there are risks to the

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from increased international tourism, but

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is important and any risks can be offset by different measures.