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Reading story books is better for children than watching television or playing computer games.Do you agree or disagree.

#story #books #children #television #computer #games
I should
first
 say that I love my family and I can’t imagine my
life
 without them. But only to talk about
one
 family member I am so proud of I can refer to my sister. So I’d like to tell you about
this
 person. my favourite, admiring, and respectful sister. She is
one
 year older than me. I can recall that we spent a bunch of time studying and playing games together since we shared the same bedroom.
Besides
, as I remember she had a quite carefree childhood with nothing to worry about and she was actually quite playful. Opposite, I used to be a very quiet person. I was envious of her personality a lot. She has had a very important role in my
life
, even though we are only
one
 year apart. She has always been trying to encourage me to attempt everything and supported me to shine in my career and
life
 path,
also
 gave me lots of advice when I was confused in
life
. I would say that now she is 20-something, ah 26 years old, she majors in medicine and she is getting to be a resident doctor very soon. I would say I admire her because of her outstanding features. And her problems or difficulties that she’s had in her
life
, she has never given up. I am sure she will be an excellent doctor
one
 day. So yeah that’s the reason I decided to talk it about.
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