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Many jobs used to be done at home by hands but nowadays, increasing number of them are done by machines instead. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of this.

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In the modern era , a number of
work
 was done by
machine
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,
on the contrary
, it did by
people
 the
people
 so
this
 essay explores the disadvantages of
this
 statement.
First
 of all , numerous
people
 left their jobs due to the advanced technology and become unemployed ,
for example
 , a single machine does the same
work
 as 10
people
 ,
consequently
 , they lost their task , owing to the technology and without it , they feel like handicapped.
Moreover
 , it impacts their family budget and facing an economic crisis for the reason that they left the workshop ,
for
instance
 , nowadays , farming technology become popular rather than in the past ,
as
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 a result , labour cannot get
work
 to do farming in the field.
Furthermore
 , most
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things are not too good as compared with handmade items , due to some reason ,
for
instance
 , there are lots of differences between those made by machines and
people
.
On the other hand
 , it can fulfil the demand of items , due to get thousands of things in a minute , it works fast rather than individual ,
for
instance
 , many objects which takes time when it made by
people
 ,
on the contrary
 , while machines established in just a minute.
Secondly
 , these types of thing
is
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 available in a very cheap range due to the material ,
for
instance
 , they only focus on stock so that they use low material to produce it ,
consequently
 , everyone can purchase it and they can meet their needs. In conclusion , both are important to the development of a country's economy so we can not avoid any single thing but the government should
work
 on the handmade businesses to establish them.
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