The promoters of social media claim that they are connecting people and enabling people to share like never before. While critics claim that social media site often impinges upon one’s privacy. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the modern era, technology is advanced and changed our social lives.

Moreover

, digital media is

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way to talk with any person and share data across the globe. But sharing of

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information can

also

disturb the privacy of

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the individual

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individual

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individuals

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.

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both sides of

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and

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submits a plausible opinion.

To begin

with, many applications are developed

such

as Whats app, IMO and many more which

assists

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to have a link with family and friends who are miles away.

Furthermore

, Google map gives the destination to reach in less time and convenient way.

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,

Zoom

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application aids

professional

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professionals

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to attend

meeting

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meetings

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and

conference

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conferences

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online in different modes (individuals or in groups).

In addition

to

this

, job-seekers can easily find jobs and get selected through video and telephonic interviews.

Hence

, it

also

helps to increase the knowledge related to any topic. On another hand, people update all

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on Facebook which assists

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hacker

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hackers

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or criminals to find the person without any difficulty.

By sharing

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these details, breaches their privacy.

For instance

, on the installation of any software or application, permission is to be accessed.

Firstly

, if given

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access it means we are providing full rights to control the device.

Secondly

,

fraudster

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fraudsters

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making

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money by sending links on mobiles or emails. Many inappropriate contents are available which has devastating effects on adolescents.

Thus

, many humans have

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experience

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experiences

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and lose confidence

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sites. To conclude, social media is

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part of life and connect everyone throughout the world. In my opinion, life is incomplete without these social platforms. In

future

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more people will use these websites for their convenience.