“Some believe that people are naturally born leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.”
“Some believe that never Good
people
are naturally born leaders
while
others feel that leadership
skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.” Introduction According to
people
perspective Change noun form
people's
leadership
is a god gifted
quality that cannot be learned but Add a hyphen
god-gifted
that
Correct word choice
apply
people
’s perspective and nothing in this
world can’t be learned with dedication and repetition. Leadership
is an action not
a position. Add the comma(s)
, not
The
matter of factCorrect article usage
A
is that
the practical meaning of Verb problem
,
leadership
is far different from theoretical
world. The bookish language will assist you for sure but to be a great leader, a person should hold two Add an article
the theoretical
qualities
courage and persistence along with
hard work and that leads him to enormous victories. In my opinion
if a person has Add a comma
opinion,
this
god gifted
quality and yet does not utilize his true potential in terms of Add a hyphen
god-gifted
leadership
that means he runs his own life by himself and
Correct word choice
apply
on the other hand
if a person aims to change he will ;indeed. ‘’Man cannot remake himself without suffering for he is both the marble and the sculpture’’ There is an example of leadership
Correct article usage
the leadership
qualities
of Nelson Mandela who always think
for the next generation,Wrong verb form
thought
Correct word choice
and
focus
Wrong verb form
focused
election
. He always Change preposition
on election
motivate
his nationWrong verb form
motivated
,
and picked his nation from the darkness to Remove the comma
apply
bright
future, he always talked about Correct article usage
a bright
rule
of law and never broke any law. And for those who think that Correct article usage
the rule
leadership
qualities
can built actually
they were talking about politicians and politicians always Add a comma
actually,
show-off
their activities Correct your spelling
show off
just
act like Correct word choice
and just
leaders
but they are not leaders
and they not
have Change the verb form
do not
did not
leadership
qualities
, they always focused
just on the next election to make Wrong verb form
focus
people
fool. The best example of such
type people
of is Nawaz Sharif from Pakistan. That applies to the fact that if you are desperate enough to attain heights of success then
for sure you will attain
. Correct pronoun usage
attain it
This
then
ends the contradiction that leadership
is a quality people
are naturally born with, with dedication anyone can learn the art of leadership
, coming to the conclusion of my essay. Leadership
always
born naturally Add a missing verb
is always
the
their Remove the article
apply
qualities
are GOD-GEFITED but peoples
can Fix the agreement mistake
people
also
learn a lotChange preposition
of
Qualities
as leaders
have, with the passage of time.Submitted by tauqeer.imperial on
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