“Some believe that people are naturally born leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.”
Introduction According to
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people
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people's
leadership
is a Use synonyms
god gifted
quality that cannot be learned but Add a hyphen
god-gifted
that
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apply
people
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this
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Leadership
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matter of fact is that the practical meaning of Correct article usage
A
leadership
is far different from Use synonyms
theoretical
world. The bookish language will assist you for sure but to be a great leader, a person should hold two Add an article
the theoretical
qualities
courage and persistence along with hard work and that leads him to enormous victories. In my Use synonyms
opinion
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this
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quality and yet does not utilize his true potential in terms of Add a hyphen
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and
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apply
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leadership
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qualities
of Nelson Mandela who always think for the Use synonyms
next
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and never
election
. He always Change preposition
on election
motivate
his nation, and picked his nation from the darkness to Change the verb form
motivates
bright
future, he always talked about rule of law and never broke any law. And for those who think that Correct article usage
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qualities
can Use synonyms
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be built
actually
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,actually
show-off
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show off
just
act like leaders but they are not leaders and they Correct word choice
and just
not
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do not
leadership
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qualities
, they always focused just on the Use synonyms
next
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people
fool. The best example of Use synonyms
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people
of is Nawaz Sharif from Pakistan. That applies to the fact that if you are desperate enough to attain heights of success Use synonyms
then
for sure you will Linking Words
attain
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itattain
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people
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leadership
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite