“Some believe that people are naturally born leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.”
Introduction According to
people
perspective Change noun form
people's
leadership
is a god gifted
quality that cannot be learned but Add a hyphen
god-gifted
that
Correct word choice
apply
people
’s perspective and nothing in this
world can’t be learned with dedication and repetition. Leadership
is an action not
a position. Add the comma(s)
,not
Change preposition
As the
The
matter of fact is that the practical meaning of Correct article usage
A
leadership
is far different from theoretical
world. The bookish language will assist you for sure but to be a great leader, a person should hold two Add an article
the theoretical
qualities
courage and persistence along with hard work and that leads him to enormous victories. In my opinion
if a person has Add a comma
,opinion
this
god gifted
quality and yet does not utilize his true potential in terms of Add a hyphen
god-gifted
leadership
that means he runs his own life by himself and
Correct word choice
apply
on the other hand
if a person aims to change he will ;indeed. ‘’Man cannot remake himself without suffering for he is both the marble and the sculpture’’ There is an example of leadership
qualities
of Nelson Mandela who always think for the next
generation, never
focus Correct word choice
and never
election
. He always Change preposition
on election
motivate
his nation, and picked his nation from the darkness to Change the verb form
motivates
bright
future, he always talked about rule of law and never broke any law. And for those who think that Correct article usage
a bright
leadership
qualities
can built
Change the verb form
be built
actually
they were talking about politicians and politicians always Add a comma
,actually
show-off
their activities Correct your spelling
show off
just
act like leaders but they are not leaders and they Correct word choice
and just
not
have Add a missing verb
do not
leadership
qualities
, they always focused just on the next
election to make people
fool. The best example of such
type people
of is Nawaz Sharif from Pakistan. That applies to the fact that if you are desperate enough to attain heights of success then
for sure you will attain
. Correct pronoun usage
itattain
This
then
ends the contradiction that leadership
is a quality people
are naturally born with, with dedication anyone can learn the art of leadership
, coming to the conclusionSubmitted by tauqeer.imperial on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite