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Some believe that people are naturally born leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#believe #people #leaders #leadership #skills
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Some believe that
people
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 are naturally born
leaders
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 while others feel that
leadership
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skills
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 can develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion Some
people
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 think that
leaders
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 are born with
leadership
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qualities
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, but opposing
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, some think
leadership
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qualities
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 can be achieved. A leader with
leadership
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qualities
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, in my opinion, should have a good and strong
personality
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, while the essential
skills
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 for
leadership
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 can be achieved. To be a born leader requires natural
skills
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 and
qualities
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 through which he/she can encourage, motivate, and inspire
people
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 with lots of energy. Some
people
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 are born
leaders
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.
Leadership
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qualities
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 can be found in singers, motivational speakers, and business managers who can manage and arrange big and crowdy events and inspire others with their knowledge, management, presentation, and
personality
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,
On the other hand
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, some
people
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 think
leadership
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qualities
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 can be achieved to be a leader. Like nowadays, a lot of
leadership
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 and mentorship training, workshops, and seminars are arranged by different institutions and
people
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 learn
leadership
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,
management
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and management
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qualities
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, learn new
skills
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, improve their
personality
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 and communication
skills
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, and improve their knowledge and confidence. Different politicians learn
leadership
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qualities
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 from experience to rule and prove that
leadership
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 can be achieved by practice and experience. Some
leaders
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 are born to rule, while some acquire
skills
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 for
leadership
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. In my opinion,
leadership
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 can be achieved by skill, experience, knowledge, and
personality
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, but
leaders
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 by birth are born with all these
qualities
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.
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