The government should take responsibility for their actions to the environment. To what extent do you agree?

In

this

age of change ,Environmental Pollution has become one of the major

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.

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there is a debate

whether

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liability must be taken by the

Government

against their steps

towards

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the environment. From my

perspective

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i

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agree with

this

view . Admittedly ,

increase

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the increase

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in population and

industrial

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the industrial

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revolution lead to

range

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of

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requirements

requirments

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requirements

.

First

of all , More people means more space required for living .

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to that every adult

to

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be given a job to meet his/her

family

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needs. These are the major reasons for the deforestation of the environment .

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, I live in Chennai . 100 years ago Chennai city's total area was 10KMs diameter currently it is 20KMS which is increased by 100% .

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has done their job to

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accommodate

accomodate

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accommodate

migrants from the same state and from other states to live in the City .

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of

this

, If authorities were planned the city expecting the copious population elevation and need

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Industries 100 years back , cutting of trees and construction of building

the

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houses on the river might have been avoided.

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, Due to

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building

buiding

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building

houses on the lake and rivers , whenever it rains those houses are

inandated

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inundated

with

rain water

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. For these reasons only ,

Government

should take responsibility for their actions

to

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the environment. To conclude ,

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i

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would concede that Infrastructure extension is the need of the hour,it could have been avoided with proper planning by the

government

officials which will in turn stop polluting the atmosphere,cutting

of

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trees and drenching

of

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rivers and lakes.