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The government should take responsibility for their actions to the environment. To what extent do you agree?

#government #responsibility #actions #environment
In
this
 age of change ,Environmental Pollution has become one of the major
concern
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.
Currently
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 there is a debate
whether
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 liability must be taken by the
Government
 against their steps
towards
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 the environment. From my
perspective
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i
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 agree with
this
 view . Admittedly ,
increase
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the increase
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 in population and
industrial
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the industrial
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 revolution lead to
range
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 of
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requirements
requirments
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requirements
.
First
 of all , More people means more space required for living .
In addition
 to that every adult
to
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 be given a job to meet his/her
family
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 needs. These are the major reasons for the deforestation of the environment .
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, I live in Chennai . 100 years ago Chennai city's total area was 10KMs diameter currently it is 20KMS which is increased by 100% .
Government
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 has done their job to
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accommodate
accomodate
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accommodate
 migrants from the same state and from other states to live in the City .
Instead
 of
this
 , If authorities were planned the city expecting the copious population elevation and need
of
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 Industries 100 years back , cutting of trees and construction of building
the
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houses on the river might have been avoided.
For Instance
 , Due to
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building
buiding
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building
 houses on the lake and rivers , whenever it rains those houses are
inandated
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inundated
 with
rain water
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rainwater
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 . For these reasons only ,
Government
 should take responsibility for their actions
to
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toward
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 the environment. To conclude ,
Although
i
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 would concede that Infrastructure extension is the need of the hour,it could have been avoided with proper planning by the
government
 officials which will in turn stop polluting the atmosphere,cutting
of
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trees and drenching
of
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rivers and lakes.
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