The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by seleting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given plans inform about road access to a
city
hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
Overall
, they summarise the main development from 2007 to 2010 such
as roundabouts bus
station and extended can parks.
In 2007, the city
hospital was in the center and the ring was all over it. The hospital artery connected the city
artery with the ring course. There were six bus
stops on hospital rd
three on each side exactly and can park: staff and public were also
placed on the eastern side of it.
Letter on 2010, There were a lot of changes in access roads though the ring highway remained untouched Hospital rd
was introduced with two circle type roads called “roundabout”, one was in the joint of the ring road and hospital rd
where another one was in the joint of city
artery and hospital rd
. Right-side bus
stops were replaced by a bus
station. Car
park: staff and public, were spitted into two different car
parks, one for workers and the other for public. Staff can place was remained the same position of the previous car
place, but public car
park moved next to the ring course.Submitted by shovog375 on
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