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Some believe that people are naturally born leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#believe #people #leaders #leadership #skills
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Leadership
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 is an attribute which makes people stand out and prominent. The
ability
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 to be able to lead is a
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God given
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 blessing, according to some. To others, anyone can excel at
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 skill. In my opinion, not all
leaders
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 are ‘born
leaders
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’ and various factors including society, circumstances,
upbringing
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and upbringing
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, contribute
towards
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 a personality which
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 comes out as a leader. Those who advocate the idea of naturally born
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 tend to refer
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this
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ability
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to
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 genetics and family background. They claim that bloodline had a deep impact
over
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 a person’s foresight and
decision making
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 tendency.
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,
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 can only be attained by those who have witnessed their family members leading, not
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.
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, the other school of thought solely ignore the above narrative and are of the opinion that with the help of continuous learning and hard work, one can develop
leadership
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 skills. They propagate that influencing is not related to the parents an individual is born to, it is rather an
ability
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than
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that
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 anyone can achieve. In
real life
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 examples,
leaders
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 like Malcolm X, Che Guevara,
Khumeni
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Khomeini
, and many
were
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others were
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 ordinary people who belonged to the general class of society yet they managed to lead and bring about a change. To sum up, based on observations and experiences, it can be established that
leadership
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 is not an innate
ability
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. People can be good
leaders
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 if they learn from personal and others’ experiences.
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