Write at least 150 words. You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • Say why the company should consider you for the job You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir,

#job #newspaper #manager #company #information #work #addresses #sir

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter regarding an advertisement published in the Gandhi newspaper , I would

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apply for the position of senior product analyst which is mentioned in the advert.

Firstly

, I have completed my bachelor's degree in information technology from the renowned institute "RKDF University" , where I was selected for campus placement and joined my recent company as

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assistant trainee. I have

also

then

persuaded my masters in the same stream taking 2 years of leave without pay . Currently , I am working in Neo company as a role at product analyst for almost 3 years, with a total experience of 7 years . In

this

,company my major role is coordinating with clients to gather information and create user stories which are

further

developed by developers.

Additionally

, I have done a few certifications in Agile

such

as PSM1 and PSPO1. I am attaching my

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and reference letter from my current supervisor . Hoping for

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response. Yours Faithfully, Pooja

Submitted by pooja.raikwar27 on Sat Sep 10 2022

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8 paragraphs

170 words

6.50

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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