Some people think it's better women can join army navy and Air forces. Give advantages and disadvantages of this

Traditionally,

men

used to be the key protectors of the country while women mainly were in charge of domestic issues. Since gender equality has been strongly advocated, some people questioned the allowance of female

soldiers

. In

this

essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of female

soldiers

. From the perspective of the government, recruiting female

soldiers

is strongly related to national military power.

Firstly

,

this

is more likely to increase the number of national

soldiers

who can protect their nation rather than having only male

soldiers

.

Secondly

, it is scientifically proven that there are different skills between

men

and women.

For example

, administration, organizing and multi-tasking duties can be much more well performed by the female than

men

.

Additionally

, in some counties, military

soldiers

can be considered a prestigious job, especially since their perks are considered significantly generous.

This

can be given to the female if they can join the military.

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men

can feel less responsible to go to the army. .

On the other hand

, there are some concerning circumstances for having female

soldiers

.

First

of all, due to the female body being usually more fragile than the male's, they both meet the same types of practical strength tests for promotion

such

as racing and push-ups, which can affect less beneficial to female

soldiers

.

Moreover

, as women have naturally given bodies to give birth and raise children, it can affect to national fertility rate.

For instance

, young female

soldiers

serve the country when it is an important period to have a baby and after giving birth, it is difficult to maintain their job. In conclusion, due to raising gender equality, some people believe that female

soldiers

must be allowed to join the army because

this

can boost the power of the national military,

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female has different talents compared to males and military perks can be equally given to people.

However

, there are some concerns that physical differences can cause unfairness in

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promotion and can be related low birth rate