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Chloe warming is one of the biggest threat to our environment What causes global warming what solutions are these to this problem

#chloe #threat #environment
Nowadays, in
this
 modern era the Earth has been warming
day
 by
day
 there are many reasons
of
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 it. Chlo warming is
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also
aslo
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also
threat
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 to our nature. I completely agree with
this
 phenomenon
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I will discuss some causes and solutions in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
 with, there are some causes of global warming, it is increasing
day
 by
day
 because the Earth has more polluted as compared to ancient times there are many industries and traffic conjunction issues it makes insignificant pollution.
such
 as
,
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 Air and noise. Even more,
forest
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 has sharply decreased
human
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because human
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 beings change the wildlife to
public
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the public
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 area they destroy their green land and forest sides.
for instance
,
according to
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a ,study
it
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showed that in two and half decades 25 forest area changed into
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human living area.
However
, every lock has
an
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 own key, the government should be making new rules for traffic conjunction problems that can easily decline the level of travelling.
Furthermore
, the government should be and the public has been
planted
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 a lot of
trees
 in the near living areas. Because
of
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the
trees
 make increase oxygen in the air and decrease carbon dioxide.
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, a survey conducted by BBC news channel
it
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showed that Dubai has planted numeric
trees
 in the nation and
it
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the
country
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 temperature is 50°c to 35° in a year. To conclude,
the
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global warming has common a problem in the nation. But, the government should be aware of the public and
planted
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trees
. Make the new rules of pollution.
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