The importance of funding
by
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for the
of individuals is always debatable
hasCorrect word choice
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now become more
.
Which manyCorrect pronoun usage
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claim the
is wasting their
by funding
in Change preposition
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the Correct article usage
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music and
theatersChange the spelling
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while
otherFix the agreement mistake
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believe that the
must need to
investingWrong verb form
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wealth in civil services.The substantial influence of
trend has sparked controversy over
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potential influence in recent years.In my opinion,
argumentCorrect article usage
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on funding
onChange preposition
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public works is a top priority for
governmentAdd an article
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.
To commence with that, the
and foremost reason behind
is that the construction and facility for educational
centersChange the spelling
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are very low.To elaborate, In my country India the
spend
smallAdd an article
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amount of wealth to establish schools and colleges due to
illiteracy among
is
generateChange the form of the verb
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.
, the literacy
in India is 74% which is very low when
compareChange the form of the verb
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with other nations like America, Australia and Canada.
, development statistic in small villages was
poor.It is very
surprisinglyReplace the word
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, to know that in some tribal areas
are unaware related of the advancement of technology like mobile phones, laptops etc.So, the administration needs to fund wealth in villages.
Moving
, one of the most underlying reasons
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from the fact
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that unemployment is increasing
amongChange preposition
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communityAdd an article
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due to fewer job opportunities.Because of
poverty
is increasing in various nations.
,
unemploymentCorrect article usage
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proportion in countries like Qatar is 0.3% and
SouthChange preposition
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Africa is 29.03% which was the lowest
in the whole world .The reason behind
is the less funding by the administration.
,
NowdaysCorrect the word
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obesity among individuals is increasing .Because the facility of parks and yoga centres are very moderate due to
this Correct determiner usage
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public spend most of their time watching
televisionsFix the agreement mistake
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and mobile phone .
face many health issues like Asthma ,
cancerCorrect word choice
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, .Change the punctuation
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So ,for resolving these health issues
must construct parks for walking and playing games.
, these are the reasons why the
should
fundingWrong verb form
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inChange preposition
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public services.
In conclusion, education is
anChange the article
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strong route to
changeWrong verb form
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countryChange noun form
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face and
gaming sector can rise
economicCorrect article usage
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.I think music and
theaterChange the spelling
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are not
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youthful
sectorChange the noun form
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rather than
services.