Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or diagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The increasing number of land transport has caused tremendous environmental pollution and traffic congestion. The globe is rapidly suffering from noise and air pollution produced by large numbers of
cars
Use synonyms
.
Hence
Linking Words
,
therefore
Linking Words
to lessen these issues, some people are of the opinion that the best possible way is to hike the
price
Use synonyms
of fuels.
However
Linking Words
, I am against
this
Linking Words
view and I am in the perspective that the number of vehicles will rise irrespective of the
price
Use synonyms
of fuel unless government intervents in some logical and doable policies and regulations.
This
Linking Words
is a personal perspective that hiking the
price
Use synonyms
of petrol would rather widen the gap between poor and rich.
This
Linking Words
is because the wealthier persons will have no impact on the fuel
price
Use synonyms
and
hence
Linking Words
they don't mind fueling
cars
Use synonyms
and purchasing new ones. Whereas on other hand, already being in a disadvantaged group, they will lack all the luxury lives.
Therefore
Linking Words
,
instead
Linking Words
of raising the
price
Use synonyms
of energy, the government should formulate policies that benefit not only the environment but
also
Linking Words
the public.
For instance
Linking Words
,
such
Linking Words
as deploying more public transport with better timing and adequate seats.
This
Linking Words
will not only reduces the traffic congestion but
also
Linking Words
highly benefit
middle-income
Add an article
the middle-income
a middle-income
show examples
class family. Another measure government could take is issuing a driving license to a maximum of two in the family. It means in a household, there should be only two
cars
Use synonyms
at the highest number
otherwise
Linking Words
it will go against the law if the household owns more than 2
cars
Use synonyms
. Another option state could do is encourage people to walk or go cycling for a short destination by constructing lavish, wide, and scenic footpaths.
Submitted by tyangki on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: