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Some people believe that reading books are better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #books #tv #computer #games #children
It is often argued that
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 youngsters should spend their
time
 reading
books
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watching television or playing computer games. In my opinion, I totally disagree with the statement because
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 believe every activity has its own merits.
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reasons
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reasons
 for my stance as well as examples in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin
 with,
books
 are
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a major
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 source of knowledge. In spite of accessing
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information
informtion
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information
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 easy because of
internet
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,
books
 are
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preferred
prefferd
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preferred
 over digital sources. Reading
books
 will help to perform well in your academics. Not only in academics but they
also
 help you in your career. For an instance, in a
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 it was found that people who read
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 have experienced a rapid
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growth in
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growth in
 their professional life. The habit of reading
books
 regularly would allow you to have
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time table
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.
On the other hand
, there is more to life than reading
books
 and gaining knowledge. Childhood plays a vital role in developing the character of a person.
Although
 , reading
books
 has its
advatages
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advantages
 children should
also
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participate
partcipate
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participate
 in other
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activities
activites
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activities
such
 as watching television, playing sports or computer games. These activities
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helps
hepls
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help
 teenagers to
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develop
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develop
 other skills
such
 as acting, singing, etc. It
also
 helps children have an active social life and experience every aspect of their childhood.
Yongsters
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Youngsters
 should find a balance between their study hours and
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leisure
time
. In conclusion, reading
books
 is not the only thing to do in childhood, teenagers should
also
 have fun by watching T.V or playing video games.
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