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Traditional food is undergoing great changes and being replaced by new diets. What do you think are the reasons and what do you think about this phenomenon?

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Nowadays,with globalisation and urbanization,massive
changes
is
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 happening in all aspects of tradition
such
 as clothes,
food
 and language.Traditional
food
 undergoes extensive alterations due to modernization and to meet the demands of the people and is replaced by newer diets
such
 as fast
food
 and packaged goods.In
this
 essay,I will discuss the reasons behind
this
 phenomenon and give my opinion on
this
 issue.
Firstly
,in
this
 modern world,traditional cuisine which is rich in flavour and contains
a great deal of
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 ingredients to create can
also
 take a huge amount of time which can ultimately,lead to
changes
 being made to traditional
food
.It could be altered to make new recipes so that it meets the demands of the people
such
 as
food
 being easier and
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convenient
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more convinient
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convinient
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convenient
 to make.
Secondly
,It could
also
 be because of health factors.Traditional
food
 could have high levels of cholesterol,
fat
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 which might have detrimental effects
to
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 the human body so it could be altered to make healthier alternatives. In my opinion,I believe that it is of utmost importance that we preserve our heritage and culture and not lose it to the
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ever evolving
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 world.There should be events that
presents
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present
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 culture and tradition and
show-case
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showcase
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 traditional foods.While is it wise to keep up with the
changes
, it is
also
 of great importance that
preservation
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the preservation
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 of culture and tradition is done. To conclude,traditional
food
 is experiencing
changes
 which
leads
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 to
creation
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the creation
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 of new recipes mainly for
customers
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customers'
customer's
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 demands and for health reasons.
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