The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.
Wave
energy becomes one of the renewable energy that making
Wrong verb form
makes
profit
in the area of high waves. The mechanical of the producing electronics from Add an article
a profit
this
will be describe
. The main Change the verb form
be described
part
is composed of the chambers which is the part
that let the air flows into the chamber. The air pressing
the turbine from two Wrong verb form
presses
side
in opposite direction, wind from above and wind from under Change to a plural noun
sides
zone
of the Correct article usage
the zone
wave
to make
the turbine Change the verb form
making
running
. When the turbine Wrong verb form
run
moving
Wrong verb form
moves
its
will cause the electricity generated. Apart from the main Correct pronoun usage
it
part
, the machines need to operate in the part
where large wave
normally occurs then
the output will come greater than operating in a small waves
Change the noun form
wave
zone
. Nevertheless
, large
Correct article usage
a large
wave
zone
will cost high installation more than operating in small
Correct article usage
a small
wave
zone
. Finally
, cost input need
to Change the verb form
needs
Add a missing verb
be calculation
calculation
and Replace the word
calculated
evaluation
with the outcome.Replace the word
evaluated
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