Task 2- this will be the end of our discussion on "negative or positive development essays. More and more people today are becoming overly dependent on the internet and phones. Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, individuals are increasingly becoming addicted to the

internet

and the

use

of mobile devices.

However

,  in my opinion,  it is a negative development and

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will explore my reasons.

First

and foremost,  depending heavily on the

use

of the

internet

can lead to laziness among children, causing a reduction in mental activities intellectually.  Most youngsters will no longer have the ability to carry out any task that requires critical analysis because

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it will rather be much easier surfing the net for it.

For example

,  the Survey carried out among children in Zimbabwe

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  shows that  they are behind in making critical decisions in their daily activities. 

This

  proves that over-dependence on the technological

use

of a phone has impacted negatively

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them.

Additionally

,  the

use

of the

internet

and telecommunication devices could cause one to live a sedentary lifestyle, and  a Lack of muscle activities, leading to some health issues

such

as obesity, hypertension and cardiac failure amongst others, will

then

spring up.

For instance

, during one of the Parent-teachers Association's meetings held in Premier College,  in Kano State Nigeria,  parents noted that their children are increasingly becoming overweight

as a result

of constant

use

of mobile gadgets for games

instead

of physical play that enhances their wellbeing. In conclusion, 

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am convinced that over-dependence on the

internet

and the

use

of mobile devices is not a welcome idea.

This

is because it could lead to mental laziness among teenagers and health problems resulting from a sedentary lifestyle.