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People prefer high paid jobs as compared to job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

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We all work to reward ourselves financially. Some people believe that having a high-salary job is more important than being content with it. As for me, I strongly think that high-paid
jobs
 have greater benefits and impact on a person’s life than just being satisfied with them. High-paid positions can comfort an individual in many ways. A decent income secures good education and lifestyle for the family. Parents work to ensure that their children can get into well-renowned schools and universities and get employed in highly reputable companies in the future or even become successful entrepreneurs. Reflecting on what’s happening currently in the world, the economic market is facing high inflation, families with high-paid
jobs
 can survive
this
 crisis whereas,
on the contrary
, others with low-paid
jobs
 are struggling to survive. For those who think that being satisfied with their
jobs
 is more important, the reason behind it is that
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 they mainly focus on their mental and physical health more than any other aspects of life. Being happy in a working environment plays a vital role in increasing productivity. A person can be more creative when he is loving what he does.
Moreover
, it can
also
 help in decreasing stress levels and prevent severe illnesses
such
 as high blood pressure and depression. In China, many workers have committed suicide from encountering an intensive busy working routine. To conclude, I think a great income can guarantee a great life.
However
, a person should
also
 take into consideration the consequences accompanied by having financial stability but on the hand ignore the emotional side.
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