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Scientists advise people to lead a healthy lifestyle, but most people continue with unhealthy activities. Why do you think it is and what can do with it?e

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The given table compares three different health
centres
 in terms of the
services
 that were evaluated by patients. Overall, it is noticeable that
Peveril
 centre had the highest average point, whereas Langston had the lowest.
In addition
, the largest disparity in the score can be seen in the service of the response to the concern. Looking
first
 at the
services
 of booking appointments and response to concerns, a marked gap can be seen in these two categories. The score of
Peveril
 in these two
services
, at 9.1 and 9.6, was higher than that of other
centres
, whereas Langston centre received only 5.2 and 4.3 points. Moving onto other
services
, all three
centres
 had a relatively high score in doctor service, with scores all over 8. In the category of care for children,
Peveril
 and Marchbanks centre received generally the same figure at 7.4, while Langston scored only 6.3 points. With regard to Pharmacy, all
centres
 showed roughly the lowest point, only
Peveril
 scored over 6, at 6.3.
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