It is nowadays seen that many students are part-time employed. Discuss advantages and disadvantages

In those times many people during education have

part-

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the part-time

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time

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job

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. Students that are part-

time

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employed could have their own

money

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and they can teach something;

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, they might have less

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. The two main advantages of half-

time

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work

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are making some cash and

learn

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something.

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, scholars,that are working could make

money

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,

whenever

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whether

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their parents give them

money

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or not. It is simple that learners need to have essentials and pay

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for

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tor

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it

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them

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like:

cut

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cutting

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hair,

buy

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buying

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any

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apply

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cosmetics and pay for bills. An example of

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are

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polish students. They usually hire and live in small flats or in an academic, so after every payment, their wallet

are

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thin.

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they take

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a part-time

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time

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job

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and they can buy things, that they want.

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, scholars have

work

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,

therefore

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they

thay

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they

have less

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.

Every

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students

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student

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after periods don't have

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for themselves because after lessons they have to go to

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. Many people say, that they can't take care

for

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their health:like going to the gym,or preparing healthy food. The

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advantage is learning in the

job

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. Many employees,that are in

work

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learn something new.

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is good for their development and skil.

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people in

job

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goes to courses,

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they improve themselves in any part of life or

job

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. In conclusion,

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learners can earn

money

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and feel how to

work

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hard

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better than do nothing.

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they have less

time

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for prepering to uniwersity or periods.