Some think people should not change their jobs while others think they should because it brings advantages for themselves, the company and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is said that staying loyal to a company for the entire

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is the most effective pathway to

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satisfaction.

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, a growing group of people have seen the benefits that

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hopping can bring. From my perspective, I completely agree with the latter opinion. On the

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hand, staying firmly

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position can usually bring stability to workers’

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is because there is not much change in their work nature, which often includes repetitive tasks and situations to deal

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Let us take the employees at the government office as an example. Their

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often

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not require learning

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skill

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and they can enjoy

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stable monthly payment as well as other fringe benefits. In fact, many of them do feel more reassured

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their life with less anxiety and distress from work, which can help them be more enjoyable in their personal time.

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the reason why most senior citizens would prefer

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simple and straightforward

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path, as well as educating their children to follow the same practice

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so that they all can enjoy a life free from thinking too much about

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,

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hopping can bring the opportunity to explore new options in

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, with

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chance of being aligned with personal

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ambitions. In fact, more young people nowadays are ready

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their expectations over

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security

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and are willing to leave their

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position after graduation for

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that they have considered more viable

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period of time.

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, as old workers leave, the company could have the chance to welcome new talents with

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of

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and creativity, which can be greatly beneficial to their operations. The fact that vacancies at companies are open can

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create a flow in human

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in the market, giving opportunities to all workers in the market, especially the young generations.

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kind of motivation can aid

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forward the economy in general. In conclusion,

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staying at

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for the entire

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can be a feasible solution for ensuring stability, moving

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a new work

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has been proven to be more beneficial for not only the workers

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the company and society. In my opinion,

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market participants, especially young people, should consider

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job hopping

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as a way to explore new possibilities so that they can find a

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that is

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worth devoting to.