With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not as close as they used to. Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.

Recently, the proportion of

divorce

and family breakdowns

have

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been on the rise throughout the world, by reason of the fact that families do not have a close bond together as much as past. I totally agree with

this

idea and in

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essay the reasons for

this

problem

also

some remedies will briefly be discussed as follows. I get hold of the opinion that the leading causes of increasing the rate of

divorce

and family breakdown could be economical problems and the advent of technology.

First

of all, the poor financial situation of

people

especially in developing and underdeveloped countries has given rise to

such

an important difficulty. To illustrate more,

as a result

of the economic weather of nations including sanctions and inflation the vast majority of society members have to work hard, as a consequence of which they hardly take

time

to spend their

time

with their families. It is worth bearing in mind that in

this

condition the family members are not able to have a strong relationship with each other.

Secondly

, the advancement of technology has led to elevating the

divorce

and family separation trend. It seems to me,

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the advent

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of social media

such

as linked in, Instagram, WhatsApp, and so forth, the majority of

people

prefer to use these applications in their leisure

time

instead

of spending their

time

with their loved ones. So, it is crystal clear that, gradually, their strong connection will disappear. I firmly maintain that,

although

this

problem has become widespread in recent years, it could be easy to solve it.

Firstly

, in order to be tackled

this

issue, financial difficulties should be addressed by government authorities.

For instance

, the government can offer

the

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well-paying jobs to

people

so that they would be capable of spending much more

time

with their family members

instead

of working the whole day to make more money.

Moreover

, it could be effective for social influencers to keep themselves away from their

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smart phones

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as well as social media in order to be able to put more

time

into their loved ones. A study conducted in some European countries has revealed that approximately 45

percent

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of the

divorce

rate has been decreased by less using social media and getting lucrative careers. By way of conclusion,

this

writer is of the idea that the

divorce

rate and family breakdowns going up because of economical and technological issues;

also

offering well-paying jobs to

people

and trying to use technology and social networking system

in

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less often could be influential to tackle

this

issue.