You recently visited a place that had a strong impact on you. Now you want to write to your friend about the place. Write a letters to a friend about the place. In the letter. -explain where the place was and how you got there. -describe what you saw -offer to take your friend there

Dear James, I hope you are doing good. I would like to tell
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place that I had been
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the
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time and the experience is overwhelming. I would like to take you there and show
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this
place
different
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our rest. I would say that it is not easy to go there without any obstacles. I went there with some of my fellow friends
last
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.
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Even though
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we had walked
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long
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period of time, it made us
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proud
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with, the
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thing when we arrived, I not only saw a stunning
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at
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there but
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person who looked scary. There were small villages where located near lakes and mountains. Some of those homes looked old and out of date. One important thing, I really appreciated is that lot of children were meeting and greeting us. children look poor
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hygiene
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hygiene
and poverty. some did not
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a
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beautiful clothes or
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shoes
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. sometimes, they usually asked us for some food and snack. To be honest, I was sympathetic toward those children.
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, I gave my own money
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them. As I lived
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village
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for
few
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days, I literally got lots of good
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that can not seek in classrooms. It would be a special moment
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me and I hope that you will
be feel
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the same
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me. Hope to take you there once
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next
summer and can not wait
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the
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adventure. I looking forward to seeing you, Your friends Jason
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