Due to so many young people dropping out from school, the rate of unemployment is increasing and it affects our society in different ways. In your opinion, how can this situation be improved?

There is an alarming rise in students who don't complete their

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education, which has a more adverse effect on the economy because the skilled workers and professionals would be reduced in number in the near future. The intervention to counteract

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trend can be done at many levels from individual to educational system reforms.

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, finding a solution to early quitting should start by addressing the reason for doing so. Financially supporting kids till they complete their education is a feasible solution that can be offered to aspire more youngsters to complete their educational

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forces young people to quit studying and look for

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of income. Supporting them

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financially

by providing loans with reasonable rates,

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and other bursaries invariably would encourage them to pursue higher studies.

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, studies have shown children from developing countries with poor economical status are like to give up schooling at younger ages compared with developed countries. Investing to gain a society of

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is the best asset a country could ask for. Education material

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to be updated to cater

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need of the job market and

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society. One of the biggest problems the students face

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inability to secure a proper job even after completing years of sacrifices to acquire

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knowledge

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knowledge

.

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, long courses of

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are likely to place a burden on

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families

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families

and children,

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are likely to result in high rates of failure. Revising

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syllabus to make changes to suit the current needs and practicality is one more reform if

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to complete their schooling. In conclusion. financial

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, and having

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practical

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syllabus would be two important changes to

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counteract

the early

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dropouts. If the interventions are not carried out we would face much worsening of

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unemployment

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unemployment

and related negative effects.