Many people believe that educational standards have declined in recent times, particularly in the areas of literacy and numeracy. Discuss the causes of the problem and offer possible solutions to it.

Some

people

incline that, currently,

standards

of education have been reduced especially in aspects of

literacy

and in

this

and mathematics. I utterly agree with

this

idea and in

this

essay some contributing factors

of

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this

issue,

also

some practical steps

could

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be taken to solve

this

problem will briefly be argued. There are two substantial reasons for being declined

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educational

standards

in occupational and economical terms.

Firstly

, it seems to me some other fields

such

as

literacy

and

numeracy

have lost their importance with the advent of

technology

. To illustrate more, nowadays, the most of

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markets prefer to recruit workforces who are proficient in

technology

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field, compared to

literacy

and arithmetic. So,

as a result

of which educational authorities have

place

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more importance on

technology

and have not made all attempts to advance the

level

of educational

standards

in

literacy

or

mathematic

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.

Secondly

, the individuals

studied

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literature and arithmetic courses are not able to get

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decent careers, as a consequence of which

such

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people

lived in the economic weather. By reason of

this

financial situation, these educated

people

in mentioned majors have shifted to other jobs lucrative

instead

of trying to improve the

standards

of their majors in educational institutions. A study conducted in London has shown that the advancement of

technology

has led to declining the educational quality in

literacy

and arithmetic fields to approximately 55 per cent. In order to remedy

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this

problem, some effective measures should be taken by the government.

First

and foremost, some decent and profitable jobs related to

literacy

and

numeracy

could be

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offer

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to educated individuals in these courses so that they encourage

to

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enhance and standardize

such

valuable fields

beside

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others.

Moreover

, the government should make

financial

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a financial

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incentive

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incentives

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for well-educated ones.

People

in

these field

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to

be encourage

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to work hard to improve the

level

of

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standards

of

literacy

and

numeracy

.

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carried out in some European countries has revealed that financial

incentive

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and offering reasonable jobs were two influential measures for the advancement of

literacy

and

mathematic

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educational

level

. To conclude,

this

writer is of the opinion that there could be two important reasons for being

declined

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the

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standards

level

of

Literacy

and

numeracy

field in terms of economy and occupation. Yet, making financial

incentive

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and providing educated

people

in these courses with lucrative careers could be

the

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effective measures to tackle

this

issue.