Although some people value public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residential areas for the ever- growing population or to develop business or boost economies. To what extent do you agree with this?

In

this

modern world, mankind has been exploiting our natural reserves and forests to develop roads,

towns

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and towns

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,

to

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apply

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build industrial zone and

finally

to

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grow up the economy. Some

people

are still fighting to preserve our natural heritage which I believe is very important and in the below essay, we will elaborate more on

this

topic. In

this

modern era, due to

this

growing population, the government is allowing new developments to happen and

are

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therefore

destroying our natural reserves and green

spaces

.

For example

in Mauritius,

metro

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the metro

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has been recently implemented.

Thus

, many trees and green

spaces

have to be eradicated to accommodate

this

new project. Even though

people

have manifested to preserve the beauty of

such

naturals

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places, they have lost their battle as the government had more power. Green

spaces

such

as parks are important for many human beings,

specially

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children. Having spent the whole day working or going to school, some

people

like to go to the local park, where they can socialise themselves, do sport and above all, they find peace. Obviously, the authorities should preserve these places which are among the free distractions of

people

. By keeping a green space, we are not only preserving the habitat of animals but we are

also

helping in preserving the

ozones

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ozone

zones

.

On the other hand

, if all these green

spaces

are being exploited to

fulfill

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people

's needs, there will definitely be no activities that

people

can enjoy for free. Some

people

hate indoor games and gym but they rather like sport in

fresh

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air. In conclusion, I strongly believe that green

spaces

should be preserved for the

well being

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well-being

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of human beings,

the

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government should impose strict laws concerning the preservation of nature. Building more buildings and developing more industries will create more global warming

to

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our environment.