Although some people value public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residential areas for the ever- growing population or to develop business or boost economies. To what extent do you agree with this?
In
this
modern world, mankind has been exploiting our natural reserves and forests to develop roads, towns
, Correct word choice
and towns
to
build industrial zone and Fix the infinitive
apply
finally
to
grow up the economy. Some Fix the infinitive
apply
people
are still fighting to preserve our natural heritage which I believe is very important and in the below essay, we will elaborate more on this
topic.
In this
modern era, due to this
growing population, the government is allowing new developments to happen and are
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is
therefore
destroying our natural reserves and green spaces
. For example
in Mauritius, metro
has been recently implemented. Add an article
the metro
Thus
, many trees and green spaces
have to be eradicated to accommodate this
new project. Even though people
have manifested to preserve the beauty of such
naturals
places, they have lost their battle as the government had more power.
Green Change the noun form
natural
spaces
such
as parks are important for many human beings, specially
children. Having spent the whole day working or going to school, some Replace the word
especially
people
like to go to the local park, where they can socialise themselves, do sport and above all, they find peace. Obviously, the authorities should preserve these places which are among the free distractions of people
. By keeping a green space, we are not only preserving the habitat of animals but we are also
helping in preserving the ozones
. Correct your spelling
ozone
zones
On the other hand
, if all these green spaces
are being exploited to fulfill
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fulfil
people
's needs, there will definitely be no activities that people
can enjoy for free. Some people
hate indoor games and gym but they rather like sport in fresh
air.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that green Add an article
the fresh
spaces
should be preserved for the well being
of human beings, Add a hyphen
well-being
the
government should impose strict laws concerning the preservation of nature. Building more buildings and developing more industries will create more global warming Correct word choice
and the
to
our environment.Change preposition
for
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