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How would you assess the preparation, feasibility, relevance and schedule of the project in question?

#preparation #feasibility #relevance #schedule #project
To begin
 with, I can appreciate the constant level of involvement
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 the project. Especially, in the practical research phases.
This
 statement applies to all the papers I supervised. The applicant followed the academic plan strictly and tried to meet all project deadlines. During the internships, he approached the individual assignments with a sense of responsibility and enthusiasm.
Moreover
, sometimes he took the initiative on his own and assumed new aspects of research for the organisations in which he was interning. The internship mentors from the companies described him as a very promising young professional. Particularly, they liked his level of knowledge and interest in understanding business processes. The relevance of the papers can be confirmed by their topics and results. For the term paper in Macroeconomics, a laborious topic related to fiscal policy in Belarus was chosen. And some of the ways of improvement specified in the pre-degree internship report have been applied at the hosting company.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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