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Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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’s
opinion
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 differ, as to whether mankind has
interest
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 in maintaining the traditional culture of their countries or not. In many cases, the globalized world we are living in,
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happens at the expense of local traditions. It goes without saying that there are many
people
 that express indifference to local customs in favour of embracing
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global ideas, but there are still traditional
people
 who see the value and importance
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 maintaining them. I strongly believe that we must preserve our traditional way of life. Globalization has influenced modern
people
 a lot. Technology,
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 networks seem to dominate the leisure time of youngsters, whether it
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 gadgets or the internet.
As a result
, some local
trends
 become global
trends
 sometimes at no time.
For example
, in
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times of
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 TikTok became super popular among
people
 all around the world.
People
 now are posting funny or even silly short videos and
make
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trends
. As
people
 from all over the world copy them and make their own videos.
Moreover
, many young
people
 nowadays prefer listening to Maluma, Karol G,
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 rather than the traditional music of their country. Youth enjoy trying new foreign food more
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 eating traditional recipes
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 because
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they
ethey
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they
 see them as
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dull or old-fashioned stuff.
However
,
personally
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 I think that It would be a great mistake to forget about our own culture and traditions. I
also
 love using modern technologies,
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 to get to know new cultures. But exactly
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 fact that each country is different makes me want to go there, to taste
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 typical cuisine, to take part in some traditional parties, watching traditional local dances. It is vital for every country to stick to its roots. And traditions are our roots. So we must celebrate typical holidays to cook traditional food and have those simple conversations. Regarding music, if we look at Rosalia, her art embodies various musical styles, she started with singing flamenco, and now it is a mixture of flamenco , R&B , art pop,
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 she is driving many youngsters crazy with her talented music. In conclusion, though there are certainly
people
 focused on global
trends
 and according to them, there is no space in their lives for outpaced things from the past, I strongly believe that we must do our best to preserve our local culture in order our ancestors can enjoy it and see the way we used to live. But I have to admit I would struggle without the Internet nowadays as I got used to it.
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