Some people think that sport teaches children how to compete, while others believe that children learn teamwork. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Sports
are commonplaces among adolescents and Use synonyms
children
, there are classes at school or facilities Use synonyms
at
the public to encourage Change preposition
in
children
to do Use synonyms
sports
. While people have Use synonyms
Replace the word
divergent
diverge
opinions on sporting can encourage Correct your spelling
diverse
children
to compete or to work as a team, I believe both of these Use synonyms
benefit
can be learnt by Change to a plural noun
benefits
children
through Use synonyms
sporting
.
From the perspective of learning to compete. Replace the word
sport
Sports
like Swimming or running are both competitive Use synonyms
sports
while Use synonyms
players
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are require
to fight for their own. Swimming competitions are usually a solo versus event, where Change the verb form
are required
players
will stimulate their adrenaline and fight for the Use synonyms
first
spot. Winners tend to fulfil their satisfaction when it is a solo sport. Linking Words
Hence
, they will become more prepared and competitive for the Linking Words
next
game, in terms to satisfy their thrives for winning.
From the perspective of learning teamwork. Basketball is a great example Linking Words
to
define team-based Change preposition
of to
Use synonyms
sports
. Fix the agreement mistake
sport
For instance
, in a basketball game, Linking Words
players
are required to follow the playbooks and play tactics that the coach has planned. Use synonyms
Additionally
, these tactics often include basic skills like passing, Linking Words
furthermore
, some team-based expertise like "pick and roll". All Linking Words
players
have to be Use synonyms
a
team Correct article usage
apply
player
for a chance of winning. Fix the agreement mistake
players
Conversely
, a selfish player that does not pass the ball or follow coaches' Linking Words
demand
will lead the team to lose. Fix the agreement mistake
demands
Therefore
, Linking Words
children
will learn to bond with teammates if they are determined to win.
To conclude, the fulfilment of winning at a sport can Use synonyms
boosted
Wrong verb form
boost
children
's competitive minds and help Use synonyms
introducing
teamwork. And both of these are the attribution for victory.Wrong verb form
introduce
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