Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter • thank them for the photos and for the holiday • explain why you didn’t write earlier • invite them to come and stay with you

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Dear John, I am writing to thank you. I had good moments with you and I do not want to forget

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holiday. I used to go travel by myself but

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holiday could change my experience and now I prefer to go trip with my family and my friends

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I would like to say thanks for your photos. you could prove to me that you are a professional photographer and you made me surprised. I wanted to write to you very sooner but when I reached my home after the holiday. unfortunately, I could not write to you because I found a job in my major

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I did not have enough time for writing

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letter. please forgive me. I am going to run a ceremony I wanted to invite you in advance. and you make me happy if you stay with me for a couple of days.I know we will have good moments with each other. I am looking forward to seeing you very soon. Best regard. Sajjad

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

172 words

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