You just moved to a new city to begin a new job. write a letter to a friend. In your letter tell you friend about your job. describe the neighborhood where you will live. Invite him or her to visit you.

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Dear Lisa, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

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letter to let you know that I have moved to a new city

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Australia. Currently, I

got

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a new job, and have been working for two months. My job is a medical

labolatory

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laboratory

sciencetist. My main task is performing blood samples. Not only taking blood from patients but

also

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analyt

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analysed

the chemistry and

hematology

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parts of blood specimens. Luckily, I have

good

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neighborhood

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who usually give me a hand whenever I

asked

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for

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. Sometimes, They have

party

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a party

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friday

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night at their swimming

pool's

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house. They

alway

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invited me to the party. one thing that I much appreciated is that I often love their cooking. one special menu which I

really

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into

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that

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BBQ. It is literally delicious! I would say that everything was

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a perfect night. As I and you have not seen each other for a

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this

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would be great if you have

long

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period of time in the next holidays.

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, could you let me know the time when you are available

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Do not hesitate to contact me. Looking forward to seeing you soon, All the best Jan

smkhanithaWed Sep 14 2022

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spelling/grammar

Make sure to proofread your letter for spelling and grammatical errors, such as 'labolatory' instead of 'laboratory' and 'analyt' instead of 'analyze'.

sentence structure

Try to use more varied sentence structures to enhance the clarity and flow of your writing. For example, expand on the tasks you perform at your job.

coherence

Ensure that you clearly separate different ideas in each paragraph to improve readability. Each paragraph should focus on a single main idea related to the topic.

content

You included personal touches about your job and neighborhood, which helps your friend feel connected to your new experiences.

tone

You maintained a friendly and inviting tone throughout the letter, which is appropriate for communicating with a friend.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

198 words

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You just moved to a new city to begin a new job. write a letter to a friend. In your letter tell you friend about your job. describe the neighborhood where you will live. Invite him or her to visit you.

Many small businesses are being forced to close because they cannot compete with multinational corporations. What problems does this cause, and how can those problems be solved?

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