Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand, what measurements can governments and individuals take to respong to this problem?

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Ms Elizabeth Robert Cardiac Rehabiitation Nurse Royal Brisbane and Cardiac Hospital QLD 4029 Australia September 14, 2022 RE: Mrs Mandy Cheng, DOB: September 25, 1962 Dear Mrs Robert, I am writing in regard to referral of Mrs Mandy Cheng, who was admitted in the Royal Brisbane and Cardiac Hospital

due to

chest pain. She will be needing a

further

management. She was brought to the Emergency room by a Paramedic personnel

due to

a chest tightness and a shortness of breath associated with a sweating and a pain in the right hand and her shoulders. She received two Aspirin tablets.

Therefore

, an assessment was conducted to her and reveal in the ECG a ST segment elevation, it is a probabble sign of an acute Myocardial Infarction.

Additionally

, her pulse is within normal limits,

however

, it show slightly irregular. She has had a type II diabetes since 2018. A series of investigations and management were done to her. She was rushed to the Catheter laboratory for Percutaneous Coronary Intervention, a two-stent were placed for the bloced right coronary artery. She was transferred to the cardiac on 09/24/2022. A full liver panel was done and reveals, her LDL were increase accompanied by her cholesterol levels, triglycerides and troponin-I ,

hence

HDL shows lower.

Consequently

, she was prescribed with: Aspirin 75mg, Clopidogrel 150mg, Metformin 850mg and Atorvastatin 40mg taken once a day. Ms Cheng was known not having a physical excercise. It would be beneficial for her if you could educate her regarding some range of motion excercises. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours sincerely, Nurse

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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limited resource
global problem
population growth
industrial expansion
agricultural activities
urbanization
water conservation policies
water-saving technologies
infrastructure
wastewater treatment
recycling
public awareness campaigns
water conservation
mindful use
domestic use
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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Some people claim many things that children are taught at school are a waste of time. Other people argue that everything taught at school is useful at some time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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