Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand, what measurements can governments and individuals take to respong to this problem?

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Ms Elizabeth Robert Cardiac Rehabiitation Nurse Royal Brisbane and Cardiac Hospital QLD 4029 Australia September 14, 2022 RE: Mrs Mandy Cheng, DOB: September 25, 1962 Dear Mrs Robert, I am writing in regard to referral of Mrs Mandy Cheng, who was admitted in the Royal Brisbane and Cardiac Hospital
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, it show slightly irregular. She has had a type II diabetes since 2018. A series of investigations and management were done to her. She was rushed to the Catheter laboratory for Percutaneous Coronary Intervention, a two-stent were placed for the bloced right coronary artery. She was transferred to the cardiac on 09/24/2022. A full liver panel was done and reveals, her LDL were increase accompanied by her cholesterol levels, triglycerides and troponin-I ,
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, she was prescribed with: Aspirin 75mg, Clopidogrel 150mg, Metformin 850mg and Atorvastatin 40mg taken once a day. Ms Cheng was known not having a physical excercise. It would be beneficial for her if you could educate her regarding some range of motion excercises. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours sincerely, Nurse
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • limited resource
  • global problem
  • population growth
  • industrial expansion
  • agricultural activities
  • urbanization
  • water conservation policies
  • water-saving technologies
  • infrastructure
  • wastewater treatment
  • recycling
  • public awareness campaigns
  • water conservation
  • mindful use
  • domestic use
  • sanitation
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