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The word is experiencing a dramatic increase in population, thus is causing problem not only for poor, undeveloped countries, but also fir industrialised and developing nations. describe some of the problem that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least on possible solution.

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 industrialised and developing
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overpopulation
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.The
word
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world
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 is experiencing a dramatic
increase
 in
population
,
thus
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
causing
Add an article
the problem
show examples
problem
Fix the agreement mistake
problems
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 not only for poor, undeveloped
countries
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
 but
also
Correct your spelling
for
show examples
fir
Correct your spelling
for
show examples
 industrialised and developing
nations
. describe some of the
problem
Change to a plural noun
problems
show examples
 that
overpopulation
causes
, and suggest at least
on
Correct your spelling
one
show examples
possible
Add an article
a possible
show examples
solution
.The
word
Correct your spelling
world
show examples
 is experiencing a dramatic
increase
 in
population
,
thus
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
causing
Add an article
the problem
show examples
problem
Fix the agreement mistake
problems
show examples
 not only for poor, undeveloped
countries
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
 but
also
Correct your spelling
for
show examples
fir
Correct your spelling
for
show examples
 industrialised and developing
nations
. describe some of the
problem
Change to a plural noun
problems
show examples
 that
overpopulation
causes
, and suggest at least
on
Correct your spelling
one
show examples
possible
Add an article
a possible
show examples
solution
.The
word
Correct your spelling
world
show examples
 is experiencing a dramatic
increase
 in
population
,
thus
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
causing
Add an article
the problem
show examples
problem
Fix the agreement mistake
problems
show examples
 not only for poor, undeveloped
countries
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
 but
also
Correct your spelling
for
show examples
fir
Correct your spelling
for
show examples
 industrialised and developing
nations
. describe some of the
problem
Change to a plural noun
problems
show examples
 that
overpopulation
causes
, and suggest at least
on
Correct your spelling
one
show examples
possible
Add an article
a possible
show examples
solution
.The
word
Correct your spelling
world
show examples
 is experiencing a dramatic
increase
 in
population
,
thus
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
causing
Add an article
the problem
show examples
problem
Fix the agreement mistake
problems
show examples
 not only for poor, undeveloped
countries
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
 but
also
Correct your spelling
for
show examples
fir
Correct your spelling
for
show examples
 industrialised and developing
nations
. describe some of the
problem
Change to a plural noun
problems
show examples
 that
overpopulation
causes
, and suggest at least
on
Correct your spelling
one
show examples
possible
Add an article
a possible
show examples
solution
.The
word
Correct your spelling
world
show examples
 is experiencing a dramatic
increase
 in
population
,
thus
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
causing
Add an article
the problem
show examples
problem
Fix the agreement mistake
problems
show examples
 not only for poor, undeveloped
countries
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
 but
also
Correct your spelling
for
show examples
fir
Correct your spelling
for
show examples
 industrialised and developing
nations
. describe some of the
problem
Change to a plural noun
problems
show examples
 that
overpopulation
causes
, and suggest at least
on
Correct your spelling
one
show examples
possible
Add an article
a possible
show examples
solution
.
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  • dramatic increase
  • undeveloped countries
  • industrialised nations
  • resource strain
  • environmental degradation
  • food security
  • malnutrition
  • unemployment rates
  • economic instability
  • healthcare challenges
  • mortality rates
  • infectious diseases
  • urban overcrowding
  • strained infrastructure
  • pollution levels
  • educational resources
  • family planning programs
  • living standards
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