Some people think that all TV entertainment programs should educate people about the importance of social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree

A certain
propotion
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proportion
of inhabitance opinion is that
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says that all Tv entertainment programs should give awareness about the importance of social issues. Some people think that may be right. even though
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firmly
condent
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content
confident
and
this
essay discuss them with a summary. Nowadays, society has
correpted
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corrupted
corrected
with some incidents. There are more criminal activities increasing in our environment.
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as Rape
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,
Merder
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Murder
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,
vehical
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vehicle
accidents, Parental
harasments
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harassment
,
Children
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harasments
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harassment
etc .
For example
,
last
week one of the Tik Tok
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was suicide. There for reason was leek his tiktok vedio.
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Sri
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.
On the other
hand
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bad thing is, It is
a breaking news
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on
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Television. Is that correct ? What is the
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purpose
perpose
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purpose
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telecast
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this
breaking news ? In my point of view,
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Tv entertainment programs are
attack
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an attack
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to
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peoples
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hart
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hence
we can change
this
situation from
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daily entertainment programme. For
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instance
incetance
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instance
, We can promote motivation programmes for
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generation
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with
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sholars
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.
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as, Banti & Sunti
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programme
programe
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programme
is
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funny
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programme. It can not get any
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valuable
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things for teenagers . but it
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famouse
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famous
among
chool
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school
children. I suppose
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programme should recorrect and educate
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people about the importance of social issues. It is a paramount
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decision
dicision
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decision
for
future
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the future
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.
Otherwise
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we can not change never our country.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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