You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter - Explain why you changed job - Describe your new job - Tell him/her your other news

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Dear Sam, I am writing to tell you about my new

job

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,which I recently joined.I leave my old

job

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and joined a new multinational company named Star Asia trading as a sales manager.As you know my previous

job

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was as a salesman in a small company

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my salary was very little,there is no opportunities to grow my skill and improve myself in advancement.When I found a vacation advertisement in a newspaper for a sales manager vacancy in

this

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company I applied losing no time.Because of my previous work experience and my managerial skill, the founder trusted and give me the post of sales manager.,Actually my new

job

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is very challenging and competitive, I work hard

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apply

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late at night and start early morning.Because of my busy work ,schedule I write to you very late,you can understand my situation because you already suffer the same condition,

Actually

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I forget to tell you about our friend john

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who is

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engaged to her girlfriend and they will be married

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mo month.you must come to their marriage ceremony,it varied very a long time so we didn't get together.All our friends will come at

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time and

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I will tell you how much I missed you. your best Govinda

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

205 words

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You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter - Explain why you changed job - Describe your new job - Tell him/her your other news

The Closing

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