Environmental degradation is a major world problem. What causes this problem and what can we do to prevent it?
In the 21st century, the most important
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faces by societies around the globe is Fix the agreement mistake
threat
deterioration
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substandard
soil
chemicals have contributed greatly to this
worrisome trend. Adequate sensitisation of the people on the benefits of utilizing good flow
channels and development
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the development
guidelines
to regulate industrial producers is essential in averting this
menace in our whole environs.
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inadequately
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low-quality
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this
growing troublesome trend. Poor construction of gutters and inappropriate sites for deposition of wastes eventually leads to flooding during rainy seasons and also
land pollution.Research Carried out during the last
scientific conference showed that most abasement noticed in the environment is due to gas released by bacteria found in flooded regions.In addition
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also
a leading cause of environmental decay. These chemicals when used releases free radicals that destroys
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soil
. On certain occasions,it has been shown that the use
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acid-containing
soil
leaching. Thus
, these are major contributors to Correct your spelling
decay
dacay
of the surroundings.
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the deterioration
Thus
, each of these measures are
important in halting decay in the territory.
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such
as poor flow
subways and the use
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sub-standard
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chemicals are Correct your spelling
sub-standard
majors
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major
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menace.Thus
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