Some people believe arts such as painting and music cannot directly improve quality of peoples life, so that governments money should be spent on other things. How far do you agree or disagree?

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feel

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that quality of life is not enhanced when the

government

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arts

like painting and music

instead

it should be spent on other entities. I agree

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this

statement to a greater extent with adequate supportive reasons stated below.

First

and foremost,

healthcare

is an important sector which cannot be ignored. During its initial days, Covid-19 had posed a challenge to the entire globe. The

government

was struggling to contain the disease due to poor medical infrastructure and

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healthcare

professionals

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tight patient care.

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, investing

on

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infrastructure to establish more health clinics or hospitals as well as funding medical education to attract more medical

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will help tackle the problem in near future.

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create many employment opportunities and thereby

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of life will get better.

Secondly

,

arts

is

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smaller segment,

hence

, the revenue generated by music or paintings is substantially less.  Employment opportunities produced are

also

significantly lesser when compared to other sectors like

healthcare

and innovation. Lower revenue indicates its poor performance. Investing in

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field

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can be a loss to the

government

as it fails to yield adequate profits.

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, at any given point in time hospitals will have more customers when compared to an art museum.

However

,

arts

cannot be ignored and require adequate

government

support through funds to help flourish around. There are still a lot of people in

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society who make a living by composing music and painting. Artists have improved their standard of living by practising various forms of art.

For example

, M F Hussain who was a well-renowned artist from India received backing from the Indian

government

financially for promoting art. To summarise, it is realised that

healthcare

requires major financial aid from the authority when compared to

arts

due to the emergence of the pandemic. More fund means the availability of modern infrastructure and health care technology to the general public to tackle the disease.